i focused on editing.

[Nessa]

A little bit more than usual lol.

Heres my second job adv video (yeah, I was a little lazy to edit).

Tell me what you think I should improve and what not.

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[Syn]

It'll be good if u dont edit THAT much.

some part of ur edit directs the viewers' attention onto ur edits instead of ur skill demo.
so it is not good to add so many transitions (or edit), because ur main point is ur skill demo.

it'll be better if ur videos are simple and direct to the point.

this is just my opinion, or my CnC. anyway, im looking forward of ur improvement. :blush:

[made]

remove the irawratyourmmvs from all the slides except show it at the beginning and also make the intro a lot shorter, and one more thing, don't make it over flashy

[R3SISTANCE]

Remember, the main point of the video is just to show the skills. It's kind of hard to see the skills then the whole video is moving lol. You didn't have to make it so fancy, but I like the effort! :)

[made]

would be decent if it was a MMV but you will need to remove the watermark "irawrxxxxxx"

[Kobe]

i think that irawratyourmmv thing should stay there. Because if someone would try to stel her video (which i doubt someone would) then the stealer would be blamed for copyrighting

[Goats]

As said before, far too many transitions and effects.
Good editing doesn't have to be flashy. In fact, it's better when it isn't. Simple, clean transitions from each video clip is all that is needed during a skills demonstration video. Keep the intro down to around 5 seconds. If people need to read something longer than that, they can pause. The watermark is fine all the way through IMO, but maybe move it down just a little. That or make sure it doesn't overlap too much with the in-game text.

Just constructive criticism. Keep making videos and it'll come!