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UnholyDragon
05-02-2010, 02:19 AM
Warning: following comic contains cursing
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9278/36180928.png (http://img29.imageshack.us/i/36180928.png/)

I already posted this on MapleMation already so any tips you have are dejavu to me...

Also I need a custom sprite sheet of my character SixStrike...
First person to PM me with a completed SS will get a comic version of my movie as a PM subscription...
The comics come every 5 days or so and only have 4 panels average...
Sample:
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4001/51587756.png (http://img338.imageshack.us/i/51587756.png/)
This preview doesn't have my signature however the series will due to possible stealing of my comic
:bye:
Kobe
05-02-2010, 04:42 AM
:vomit:
Skinty
05-02-2010, 04:47 AM
:vomit:

:thumbsup:
Andy
05-02-2010, 05:04 AM
Please let this be your last.
Jordan
05-02-2010, 07:24 AM
Please let this be your last.


QFT.

http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/8739/ibifbk.gif
Cullen
05-02-2010, 07:41 AM
QFT.

http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/8739/ibifbk.gif
Jordan
05-02-2010, 07:46 AM
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/8739/ibifbk.gif
Lucas
05-02-2010, 09:05 AM
Quite Simple.
Elegant, nice.
Improve and I think it'll go very nice. :P
Rip
05-02-2010, 10:23 AM
Oh don't be so harsh on the guy. I once made comics of the same quality.
when I was 8 (http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8847/comic4.png)
Anyways here are some hints:

Non-sequitur humour isn't always the best. It's overused in internet webcomics and to be honest, a face with a funny reaction barely constitutes as a punchline any more since it's so goddamn common.
Use a background. Seriously. The quality of your comics go up by so much once you do.
Rather than using pure black or pure white for text on coloured images, choose a colour and add an outline to the letters. Works a lot better.

other than that I can only say what the others said. work on your humour/wit/style and presentation before publishing. I learnt this the hard way.
ArtisticKynim
05-02-2010, 11:54 PM
^QFT.

Btw your drawing you posted on my thread is not bad at all :)
KamiChaos20
05-06-2010, 05:51 PM
Oh don't be so harsh on the guy.[/spoiler]

Agreed

You lot should not be harsh on him.

The only person I knew who was acting like
a total prick to him was the person with the
mcdonald picture.

By the way nice comic it did make me laugh XD